What is your opinion?
Good
"I love how the writer adds sounds and tries to describe each movement to add to the suspense. It was a bit short for me and I felt like a lot needed to be explained but it's an read"
Such an enjoyable story!
"I quite enjoyed this story. It has a great concept and I really do enjoy reading stories with compelling thriller plot and characters in it! To make it even better: Some of the dialogue was confusing to follow, perhaps going over this again and clarifying what is being said would do well for your readers. Maybe add a bit more description into how your characters are interacting with one another. What are they feeling? How are they speaking? I really liked the description of Lot. I thought this was a brilliant short story especially how you ended it. "
A good framework
"Overall, "Stories Told By Night" is good framework for a story that has potential--with editing, attention to character development, and some general reformatting--to become an entertaining read. There are certainly highs and lows in the story, and those that love mystery, horror, and a certain folk-tale aspect to their reads will definitely want to check it out in the future once these changes and suggestions have been taken into consideration. "
Not bad...
"The author's introduction of the book's elements creates an initial interest, especially for someone drawn to thriller and mystery vibes. While I delved into chapter one with careful analysis of each character, it felt decent yet lacking a comprehensive introduction. Glancing at the second chapter, the pacing fluctuates, possibly due to the unfolding plot. The writing style, however, could benefit from improved word choices, as some are confusing and demand close attention for full comprehension.Despite this, the concept is intriguing, especially when reading the synopsis. There's potential, but refinement through editing and perhaps placing essential details in chapter notes for clarity could enhance the overall experience."
