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Obsessed 🤩 I absolutely love the plot. Please continue writing this is soooooo good 🙏💓

" I absolutely love the plot. Please continue writing this is soooooo good 🙏💓I've been searching for stories that would have that balance if wholesomeness to spice and you've perfectly balanced it 🫶I can't stop reading . And I need another story lore of Theo when this is finished 👌"

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Profession

"OMG!!! PLZ UPDATE SOON or write a part 2. I'm fully invested in this story. I absolutely love this story. I bet Willow will never really leave even if she and Lorenzo don't stay together, she loves those kids way too much. Lucas struck her heart chords when he cried. "

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Wait….. that’s it????

"Spoilers if this shows up somewhere to soon in the book but Where’s the end? Does he kill her?? Does he find out more about his real mom??? Does willow finally accept him?? Does she decide to stay??? Now I’m sad. "

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"What a roller coaster ride wow"

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Awesome story

"Love this story. Please up date it soon."

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Edge of my seat...

"It's a thrilling story. I love Willow and her innocence."

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Why not tell me the truth?

"This is a novel of many twists and exciting surprises. Willow and Lorenzo are in far more danger than anyone thought. Hopefully Willow sees what she brings to the table before it is too late. This making me sit on the edge waiting on what will happen next."

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love your story

"can you write the remain ones or chapter"

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Profession

"Please tell me there's book 2 xx "

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Profession

"Great book…..but the cliffhanger!!!! What happens next!??? Love it!!!"

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Profession

"It was so Inter the plot the suspense the plot twists and Willow, Lorenzo, Bella, Lucas "

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Loved It

"Such an interesting story. I loved how different it was. Very detailed and I was wanting more. "

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So far great Story

"Love the slow burn of their relationship"

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Really good

"Everything in the story is very nice and the plot is very cute, I’d really recommend the book to soft romantics "

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Profession

"This story is so cute it makes you feel warm inside "

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Good

"After this chapter you definitely have me on the edge of my seat. Good writing."

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Love this book so far

"This book is so good so far I wish the plot would go by faster "

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Excellent start!

"A very compelling story, loving it so far. The bond between the nanny and the children have developed so nicely and sweet. And just can’t wait to read how the Father’s actions will intertwine with the Nanny as well."

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"Xxx xxxxx xxx xxxxx xxxxx xxx"

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Keep Going!

"Definitely hooked! Very compelling! I am looking forward to the rest of the story."

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