What is your opinion?
excellent read
"very good read...left my mind with questions . The characters are believable. The setting is described well, characters are people one would meet if one had an open mind. Teens spend much time on deep subjects ...and I find that rewarding. I don't think as a teen myself I had the luxury to investigate deeply this subject. So, the fact that he looks at it and can write so eloquently makes me wonder just what else he has in his creative brain.. I find it refreshing to read a teens response to life and I hope he writes many more stories. Language /word usage is exceptional for this age group....I want to read more of this authors work!"
This is supposed to be poetry
"This is supposed to be poetry, but it doesn't make it for me. It sounds like it was written by a child who doesn't know her grammar. For one thing the word shouldn't be cladded, it should be simply clad. What you are adding extra syllables to get the word to mean is what the word always meant in the first place. You need to do more homework to get this one right. ."
