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Jenk

"Certainly a different slant on love and probably unique. A good story with heaps of drama"

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Neighbour

"Areal life and love story. ❤️❤️❤️"

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Great

"Great story"

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The Neighbor

"I really love this! It's pretty good erotica, except the sex scenes don't last super long (they all kinda orgasm super quick, I usually like when sex scenes are more drawn out) - plus, men need at least 10-20 mins between orgasms to get another erection (just a note lol since he kinda cums then is ready again right away I've noticed) As far as the plot, it's really enticing and I like it. The characters are likeable and they have great chemistry. Your writing style is well done and I didn't notice any technical issues. Only other thing would be that the cover does not do the story justice at all. When I saw it was thought this was gonna be a comedy, and that it was not lol - so a sexier cover would be good Overall, though, great job!!!!"

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The neighbor

"I like the characters and I also like how they were described. I’m also I’m love with the chemistry between them"

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Cliff hanger I need more

"I need more. "

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Girl in scrubs

"Great story"

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The Next Door Neighbor.

"There picnic went very good. I wonder what there next date will be like!!!"

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Good

"Interesting storytelling, will there be a wedding 😊"

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The Neighbour

"Looking forward to reading more "

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