Eccentric!

"This story was one that immediately caught my attention (seven saviours from different realms, chosen ones) it was right up my alley. What truly set this story apart was your ability to siphon the different personalities, ways of life, and overall attributes of the characters without sacrificing the identity of one character over another. I adored the way curious nature of Rainn and the demanding nature of his captor, with Jack almost being a sort of father figure and overseeing those two and the group. Your writing is good. The use of details was heavy and I would just focus on polishing your writing, (eliminating those extra words in order to tighten that structure) but other than that the writing was good. The POV change from Rainn to Anelise could be slightly confusing to readers, as it was confusing to me in the beginning, just keep that in mind. In the end, I give this novel a 5 star rating and I cannot wait to read the next book in the sequel. The end definitely leaves you on a cliffhanger with many thoughts and things to consider from the first book. I'll definitely be in line for a copy of Catching Clouds Vol. 2!"