Inkitt
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His Little Game

"Really enjoyed this short story though I really want more of them!! Dayton was a hottie - I mean who doesn’t like a dom!! 🥵🥵 Thank you for sharing with us lovely!! 🥰 xo"

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His little game

"You didn't disappoint with this one. I loved it. Thanks for sharing 👍 😊 "

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Great little story

"Enjoyed this start to finish!"

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Amazing

"Loved it with great visuals reading very sexy"

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Loved

"Short and sweet loved the whole story, it got my attention from the start. "

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First story on inkitt

"this was my first book inkitt and it was damn good"

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Good short story

"This was a really good short story."

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It's draft so ovi Grammer mistakes but love story

"I just need 20 words of something story good me like we wo"

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Damned Nets

"Great short story, fun to read ❤️"

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This is my kinda erotica!!!

"I love the fact that the person who wrote this gave POV changes! This is the best way to be spicy and romantic in one book! It’s super short and straight to the point but if you haven’t already READ this!!!! "

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His little game

"Great story. It had all the good bits needed to keep a smile on my face. I especially need yo get me a shit like Silver's. 😏"

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I'm loving it so far can't wait to read more! Where will they go from here? What's the group dynamic? Will this be a series

"I like it all. Curious a bout a few things. I'd recommend it to anyone I speak to about books. "

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His little game

"I really enjoyed this book and will recommend it to anyone. "

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Loved it

"Loved it! Really loved it."

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His little game

"Luv all the spice, kinkiness and romance. Short story but very entertaining. Great job, author🫶"

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Silver

"Their connection is fun"

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Two broken people coming together and healing each other in their own way.. p e r f e c t

"Two broken people coming together and healing each other in their own way.. p e r f e c t "

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His little game

"Great story. Loved the characters!"

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Very good story.Much desire and good character development.

"I love the novel.It has a good storyline and great character development."

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I want more

"Good read. Will be better after editing, of course. Would love to see the teasing texts/game stretched out while D is still a mystery man to build angst. Missing a bit of back story to drive it home - glimpses of the past five years from both perspectives to show his obsession building as well as her trust issues over time. Looking forward to the final edit!"

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