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Ironclad

"This was quite an adventure! The story of Heath and fellow knights on this quest filled me with disappointment, anger and shock. There were times I wanted to shake Heath myself so he would wake up. His development was a long time coming and created by chaos. The betrayals felt extra painful after all that was endured. To say I have no words for the end is an understatement. I was sitting in a waiting room when my jaw dropped as a realization came full circle. I can't begin to imagine what will happen in book 2. How much more can one man really take? I fear for Heath even more. Great story! Thank you for sharing."

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A True Fantasy

"I opened this app with the intention of finding a good fantasy story to read; a good-old medieval styled plot with plenty of grim action to go around. And this story delivered. Ironclad really took me by surprise, and I found myself tearing through the chapters. Even so, nothing could have prepared me for the ending. Truly the definition of a plot twist. I greatly look forward to the second book, and thanks to the author for writing this gem."

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