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Making The Alpha Submit [BL]

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"I can't do that," he says softly, staring absentmindedly in the whiskey glass, "I'm the Alpha." "So?" "So, I'm not supposed to be this.... submissive," he spits, eyebrow creasing as if the whiskey glass is a rotten tomato. "Come here." Kamil instructs gently, watching the turmoil in the way he grinds his teeth, bites his lips but when he raised his head and their eyes meet, the hesitation fades. Dropping into his arms, Kamil strokes his hair slowly at first, curls as wispy as flowers. Suddenly, he grabs onto them roughly tilting his head towards him, trailing a finger down his throat to a nipple. And when a whimper fell from the Alpha's lips, he growled and bit his ear, leaving a mark so red fire pales in comparison. "Out there, you're the Alpha. But in here with me, you're mine. You are my good boy." ***************** (Full description down below)

Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
34
Rating
4.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

MAKING THE ALPHA SUBMIT BLURB

PRECIOUS NORTH, Alpha of the North Star Pack strictly live by a general pack code 'I for the Pack, the Pack for me'. Responsible for more than 67 werewolves (and counting) there is no time to slack off especially not when he just survived yet another attack on his life by their vicious, good-for-nothing brutish rival pack.


Well-mannered, reserved and smart, Precious North has more than earned his place as Alpha after shutting down strict opposition to rule from Elders of the Pack.

And when distressing demands arrive in the form of arrogant, greedy grabbing representative of the human government that tests his abilities as a strong-willed leader, he must be willing to do whatever it takes to protect his Pack.


Even if that meant denying any shred of happiness or desire he's buried behind a fortifed 140ft wall of enforced silver.



Here comes KAMIL SANDCASTLE, confident striding sly smirked with a killer body.

Abandoned and left to die by his own family at the age of eleven, Kamil is adopted into the North Star Pack by the then Alpha—MEREDITH NORTH, Precious' mother.


Nurtured and treated to life, Kamil owes the Pack all of his seven lives and pushes himself to be better, stronger and kinder inspite of the harsh realities he'd faced before.


Now Major Sandcastle of the pack's militia, Kamil is committed to use his body as a shield for the Alpha whose life is perpetually in danger it's almost a curse at this point.


But when he accidentally finds out the Alpha's most secretive desire, Kamil's trajectory changes into wanting to not only protect him with his body but get under his skin, closer to him, mark him his. This problem is the last complication they need.


But Goddess. He wants to shred the crisps suits Precious wears like an armor into pieces. He wants to bring the Alpha to his knees so badly it's an ache he needs bleeding.

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