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What is your opinion?
Love it!
"I choose these ratings because these chapters are good."
Wild sexcapades
"Good. A few errors but still flows good"
Daddy’s sex pet
"Sticking well to the genre. Spelling and grammar sometimes make it hard to decided what is trying to be said, otherwise well written."
Daddy's Sex
"The grammar is terrible. It's sexy though"
Too Many Errors
"There are quite a few spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. Past and present tense were mixed up. This then put me off the story as I was constantly seeing the errors."
