What is your opinion?
Great story, but needs an editor
"I absolutely loved this story. The mafia twist on sci-fi was really good and well thought out! I'd love to read more of the tales of the Alien Mob Bos and his human lovers. It was hard to read at times. Most of the punctuation is missing or misplaced. Several words are used incorrectly, like "are time," instead of "our time." There are many examples of this throughout the story. It did make me slow down while reading to unscramble what was being written. With a bit of polish through a good editor, this story would be 5 stars all across the board. "
Alien Mafa
"Another goody love this love story by an amazing author. Keep up the good work so l can keep reading 👍"
Alien Mafia
"This amazing author has so much talent! This is a great book and her other works are equally satisfying so I recommend checking them out! You want fantasy, lore, sauce, love, battle? This has it all!"
Alien mafia
"The story is interesting I thought he would take the girls with him. We didn't know he was the head of the mafia. Nothing like having power and losing what's yours. Recommend to anyone whose a fan of aliens "
Alien Mafia
"A great read, the author keeps you on your toes forsure. And the sister's are great giving the big blue Mafia man hell at each turn. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐"
