What is your opinion?
Great story
"Hi..I do like your writing and your stories specially this one ,it's very interesting and suspenseful and I'm sooo involved with it that I can't wait for the new chapters to be update..wish you success and well being"
Love , hate
"I have to admit that I love and hate the story so far. I actually loved Elisa from the beginning, her innocence and naivety coupled with her purity and forgiving nature made her lovable. The twist and turns of hers and Jeremy,s relationship at times I felt a little to farfetched. Especially when he has always loved her, Victorias character as the antagonist was interesting, I was hoping that she would have been a little more vengeful and lasted longer. I think her demise, well entertaining, was to soon. I enjoy the twist with the children, and figured out at the blood transfusion, that the girl is Gwen's daughter, so making Lui the father. I at times found myself getting passed by the twisting plot line, and had to put the story down. I have read a couple of other stories by you and have enjoyed them, this one however, has had me hooked more and am looking forward to the continuation of Elisas, Jeremy's, Gwen's, and the rest of the cast story. Thank you for sharing your stories with us. "
Long of story
"Generally I liked this novel very much, what I disagree to this novel, it is too long, the auther could have shortend."
Marvelous
"At first, I wasn't impressed with the shortness of the chapters but with time I have found myself consumed by the storyline and the characters. Super invested in the book and looking forward to updates! "
Paid For My Twin Sister’s Crimes
"I have been glued to this story. I like novels, and this one I have had on my mind every time I have to put my phone down and can’t come back to it for an amount of time. Literally it is consuming me! Such a great story. "
Love it
"Can't wait for more updates. The one thing I want to know is if Elsa's tumor will be removed and her life will be saved."
Samantha
"The book is absolutely amazing I love the plot twist and the action in it I would recommend it to those who love thrillers and suspense"
Review
"The story is touching and difficult putting it down. What l dislike is that the writer keeps on repeating past events in subsequent chapters. He deserves the rating l gave because he is an intelligent writer."
Very good. I have had tears in my eyes several times. This is the type of book you can't put down until you know the ending.
"I completely like this book"
Paid for my twin sister crimes
"I think this is one of the best stories I’ve read in a long time. I can’t wait to see what happens to Elsa and if Gwen is still alive "
It has the perfect title
"I love everything about the story it keeps the suspicion and it keeps your interest through out,the characters develop perfectly,it makes you cry and laugh,I recommend it to every one thank you sexpun for writing this book it's really really an amazing book😍it"
Paid For My Twin Sister’s Crime
"The book has a story to tell, and the author does that, with interesting twists and turns. The author takes the reader to the edge of a cliff, and doesn’t disappoint, and gives the story line , that certainly won’t let the story or reader fall down the cliff. I would like it if Elsa stops being victimized by Victoria and family. Hopefully Gwen is alive somewhere and is reunited with her twin, and not being abused by anyone. Waiting patiently for her to finish the story, as it does catch and hold my interest and fascination, as she depicts behaviors of man’s inhumanity to man. 👌🏽"
To the author
"Hi umm l just wanna tell u that I love ur books even though I'm still at part three and it is pretty much getting on my nerves. Well, I hope u don't get discouraged by the likes. Just hang in there, they will come around."
Brings so many emotions
"I have and feel so many emotions and I don't know how to express them in writing. I had put a bookmark on this story, started reading it again last night and I will say one thing.... I could not put it down. Not for a moment, even though at some point I hate some of the characters but hey that's what a book should do. A good book, written with love and dedication, should have a lot of anger and frustration, a little bit of laughter and awww moment then tears, sadness, anger again and love. This BOOK, my super fantastic author has had me on a spiral of emotions and I still love it! Gosh I love you! I love you for making me want to throw my phone across the wall and say I'm done reading this book because aaaaargh! But also make me have the, wait! Hold on, hmmm this is pretty awesome. Gosh I love you for that. And once more, thank you!"
Too much fillings in one book
"THIS book is a mix of feelings. love, anger, mystery, hate. "
Love the setting
"The twin sister dies, the remaining is forced to marry the fiancee. Crazy!!"
I love everything about this storyline.
"I love the mystery it has. Everything feels like a secret waiting to be told."
A lot of Room for Improvement
"The story is very confusing because of how it is written. The flow isn't that smooth. The story is lacking a lot of details and consistency. There were errors too with who said what. The chapters are also too short in my opinion. I also don't like how the male main character supposedly "hates" her but also finds her beautiful and kisses her. Then the female main character is the same, she was abused a lot of times but somehow she forgets about all of that and just thinks there's something about him? She's too weak and easy for him to be able to kiss her and make her feel things."
