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The Waiting Room

"When I read the first chapter of "The Waiting Room" I was immediately intrigued. My head was filled with questions, mainly with "Why?". Without wanting to spoil too much of the story, I can confidently say you did good in keeping the story suspenseful right to the end when the grand reveal came. I would have liked to get a few more hints as to what exactly the other side characters (like Alnair and Mr. Newman) had done exactly as that would have given each of them a bit more depth. Writing-style wise there were a few redundancies and word repetitions you could substitute, but that's no big issue. All in all, very enjoyable read that I binged! "

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It's perfect

"Its perfect I love it!!! It has suspens, good dialogues, good description, good plot.... AMAZING!!!"

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The waiting room

"Short and good story telling . Nice concept. Good luck to the author."

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Amazing work

"Amazing book"

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The Waiting Room

"A sad story, very well told. [No spoilers]. This is a cautionary tale for a demographic that needs to read cautionary tales. The author keeps the suspense going until the reveal in the last chapter. "

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The waiting room

"Short and simple... Kept hooked to the plot and loved it. "

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