What is your opinion?
Thrilling
"The book is damn interesting, and it kept me on my toes. The characters are interesting as well. Can't wait for future chapters!"
Good Idea but hard to get into
"Please note that this is entirely based on my personal experience while reading the story. Feel free to disagree with any points you think don't actually apply. I will start with the idea. It is interesting and something I would enjoy from what I gathered so far, but I personally felt that the pacing of the story was too fast. There were serval characters introduced so it was very hard to keep track of that. Meanwhile you placed us in a lab with all those unfamiliar things and experiments going on. I would have loved if you had either given us more information on the experiments in general during the prologue or started directly with the monster's perspective. Besides that, I personally feel that you could go into far more details in general to draw the reader into it. As we do not know anything at all. Another thing which I personally disliked was the picture added in the middle of the prologue. This is entirely a personal preference. I would have either put it at the end of the chapter kind off as extra or in a extra chapter. I hope this helps you in your writing. "
