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Broken souls

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Summary

She opened her eyes completely and looked at me. The moment I locked eyes with that forest green I was, once again, lost under her spell. She had me warped around her finger and she did not even know who I was. I knew she was trouble but I just could not help it and traveled into those desperate eyes trying to search for whatever they were trying to scream.-ZVEN This mysterious man with his black mask and chocolate eyes that now has his head tilled down and his posture straight waiting to see the next move of any of us left my heart screaming after his eyes. They looked right through all the layers I had build searching for my story, searching for comfort, screaming to know my story. He broke shields I thought nobody would be able to and left me vulnerable and scared at his mercy. But he did not took advantage of it, he did not humiliate me for being human. Instead he let down his own guard allowing my forest of eyes to catch him inside and taking a dangerous path through my desperation.-CASSANDRA

Genre
Drama,Action
Author
Adriana
Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Autors note

Hello sweeties!!! I am really greatfull y'all decided to choose my book and give it a chance💕

This story was brought to live when I was in a bad place, she was my saving, my safe space. I am gonna admit that Cassandra is inspired by me))

Also I want to let y'all know that the story focuses more on feelings than anything else. There will be strong feelings described and less about the "mafia world".

In this book there will be mentions of suicidal thoughts, SA, blood, murder, break downs, panick attacks.

Baisicly the story followes two characters that had an awfull life with awfull families but when they meet everything changes. Their facades can never hold up when they are around each other and they always see the true feelings behind the wall.

But nether of them want to accept that since they believe they are too destroyed and they do not deserve each other.

And as in every book there will be a lot of problems in front of their love but I am inviting you to see if they will meet their happy ending or not💕


ALSO IF YOU SEE ANY MISTAKES PLEASE LET ME KNOW (IN A RESPECTFULLY MANNER)


"The moment I locked eyes with that forest green I was, once again, lost under her spell. She had me warped around her finger and he did not even know who I was. I knew she was trouble but I just could not help it and traveled into those desperate eyes trying to search for whatever they were trying to scream."


"He broke shields I thought nobody would be able to and left me vulnerable and scared at his mercy. But he did not took advantage of it, he did not humiliate me for being human. Instead he let down his own guard allowing my forest of eyes to catch him inside and taking a dangerous path through my desperation."

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