Inkitt
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Good street bad grammar

"Got confusing trying to understand some parts because of incorrect gender pronouns."

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Stepfather (1v1 sweet pet Hp

" I love that in this novel the girl is not resistant the mans affection (like if the man is asking how the girl feels while having s*x she will say it's the worst feeling and in their mind their saying it feels good but they don't want you to know their honest feelings. Love the main characters But I would like in the second chapter updated give about 4 paragraph in one chapter about emotional feeling between them. Thank you. "

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