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Awesome !!

"We need more books like this!"

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Love it

"I love it! I love the way you write and just the way it all reads "

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Love this twist on the Winston Brothers

"The Winston Brothers is one of my favorite series ever and the author caught the spirit of the original series and characters with a very intriguing twist. Love it and looking forward to reading more! "

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All in

"I found the story compelling and magnetic. The writing is well done if a little chaotic with the flow of ideas, but I couldn't put it down till I ran out of chapters. I am not a romance reader prefering sci-fi and fantasy. I felt drawn into the story hanging on for the next encounter. Please read and give it a try."

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Exciting twist

"I would love to read what happens! This is a pretty cool twist of events for characters I have grown to love. It will be a treat to learn how they adapt and get through the mystery of resolving or giving into this dilemma. "

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Fun Fantasy Fanfic

"This story has interesting plot ideas. I thought it was pretty good changing the dynamics of the characters and how that would go if they were magical creatures. Fleshing out a bit more about witches and how they cast might be a benefit. Did a witch also create Kip the vampire? How do vampires originate? Having the Winstons cursed was an interesting twist, but I feel like the mind-meld of werewolves didn't pay off in any way except to showcase how in love with their partners they were. Also what happened to Diane? Where did Jennifer's cat come from? Overall it was a bit disjointed and jumping from sibling to sibling meant that there wasn't a plot-driven story. It was mostly reactionary; however the Winstons DO things, they're active in their own lives. I liked the supernatural twist on SPRU, but needs more foundation work. Cheers for the read!"

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