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Didn’t paycattenzion to the Title, sorry

"It’s a good introduction to people who suffer from severe anxiety and / or depression. . It’s easy to say when hearing about depression/suicide why these people can’t get over it etc . So this story so far is a good example why/ how they get so low and dark in their emotions "

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"I feel every word of sadness you have written It feels so real and connected "

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"I tend to stay away from books with depression and anxiety in it because it's very difficult to capture the true emotional essence of the mental health issues. You did a fantastic job in capturing the emotional side of it. I would have liked more of the growth in Ryan and Anna's relationship as a couple. That part felt a bit rushed. That is, after all, part of their character growth. I enjoyed reading this book. "

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