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Brilliant story telling

"Love the characters and the pace. Your story weaving is amazing. Keep on writing Paul."

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Looking forward to reading more...

"This story so far has twists and turns with a plotline that will always keep you guessing. Brilliantly written, while combining futuristic dystopia with ancient Norse and Russian mythology. This story is absolutely brilliant so far and I look forward to reading more!"

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