A Thrilling Ride!

"The prologue captures the reader and takes them hostage. It paints a thrillingly gruesome scene and sets up the story so well that you want to know what's going to happen next. The only tiny suggestion I have is to use dialogue tags and their names a little more sparingly because it can take the reader out of the beautifully written scene and maybe explain their action instead. Other than that it is a well-crafted riveting ride of a story with vividly pleasing descriptions with a dark/eerie plot, and great complex characters. You won't regret reading!"