What is your opinion?
Last (wo)man standing …
"A coming of age story in a dark but yet fascinating world. 🤔 Maybe not for the faintest of heart … because it can get quite gruesome at times …"
Good beginnings
"A fascinating story. Very compelling, one that draws you in, forces you to keep going. There are typos that a grammar checker should pick up on. Two areas to consider: first , details! Description of the characters, scenery and such would greatly improve the book. Two, use names during the running dialogues. Several times I lost track of who was speaking. The system of magic you developed is amazing. I think the author has the touch ... the potential for best selling author type. Definitely going to follow and see what comes next."
Amazing work, but a really messed up school!
"I really enjoy the entire plot so far! I'm excited to get to know the other characters as they're given the limelight! Here's hoping Malt survives this ordeal! I also love the dialogue and paragraph structure! Lots of white space makes it flow well!"
