What is your opinion?
FASCINATING!
"What a fascinating tale! About two boys in the forest who found a tower and make bargains with the elders in that tower. The author has a captivating writing style that pulls readers into the story, the narrative is also easy to follow, and the characters are really interesting. Cerin and Orion have different personality, Cerin is a more careful person and Orion is a little bit reckless. I am glad for the different personalities cause it supports the story's plot (imagine if Cerin is as reckless as Orion, OMG!). It also has a clever ending that will make you agape (at least me =D). So far I REALLY like it. Did not expect it will be this enjoyable. Good job for the author :) Definitely worth reading!"
Gripping!!!
"Only four chapters in and I am on the edge of my seat for more story. So creative and compelling! The story already has twists and turns and fantastic story telling. Highly recommend !"
The Tower
"The story follows two boys who go into a mysterious tower. Cerin and orion are vastly different and you learn that right away throughout the chapters. I relate to Cerin the most but you find yourself wanting to know more about the Valor. The plot is original and definitely unique. The only critique is the spacing but that’s any easy fix and it doesn’t take away from how intriguing the story is. I’ll definitely be following this story :D Amazing job! "
Immediately Immersive
"This is a unique story and I cant say that I can guess or predict where its going. It pulled me in right away and I love that I have no idea what will happen next."
Compelling Indeed!
"Although the chapters are shorter than the recommended word limit, they are captivating. Maybe you aim to write a short story or parts for each book. That is your choice, but this book has been engrossing so far. The two main characters are opposites and hence their combination of dialogues and choices provide an interesting plot to follow. I enjoyed reading it and could relate to the two point of views well. I recommend people to read this book if they are searching for a suspenseful, thrilling, and an enjoyable read!"
The Tower
""The Tower" is a relaxing read when the topic of friendship interests you. This story's strongest points were definitely the world-building as well as the two main characters. I'd suggest using the interesting concept of the tower to draw out its full potential by going into detail of its origin. Of course, in this short story you couldn't go too much into detail, but I can imagine how much of an awesome world you could be able to build if you turn this into its own story, especially since it's a good premise to depict the Elders as villains. The two main characters, Orion and Cerin, have a pretty good and solid dynamic and make a good duo, where each of them have their moments to shine throughout the story. Both are very, very likeable and the way this story delved into the topic of friendship, is a perfect match! Writing-style wise you sometimes get a bit too repetitive and some technicalities like the spacing and punctuation can be improved by simply proofreading - so that's no big deal! Good work!"
