What is your opinion?
CAPTIVATING TALE!
"THIS BOOK! It captivated me from the get go and I am not even kidding! Guys guys if you like fiction, especially young adult fiction filled with mysteries and fights, you should totally check this out! This has a very fresh plot and interesting writing style that will make you engrossed into the chapter! This is actually Rakid's second book that I read so I already know that the author has a very wonderful writing skills especially when it comes to details, but this one has a very unique plot at well! This story tells a journey about a kid named Khiri who was adopted by a very kind, brave man, and once he reached 10 years old he could feel an out-of-body experience while he was sleeping and dream about a man he never met and a scene he never seen very very clearly. Isn't it that intriguing?! I am SOOO looking forward to how Khiri's tale will evolve and I am definitely here for a long run! There are a few of very veeeery minor punctuations suggestions that maybe will enhance the story even more (like putting . In the end of sentence ^-^), but overall it does not disturb the reading flow and it is still a very amazing story. I LOVE this with all my heart. Good job for the author!!^^ "
Great!
"From the very beginning, I love the level of detail in this story. It brings you right into the action where every single fight and every single interaction mean something. Nothing is baseless, nothing is unnecessary. And it makes for some great writing with a compelling plot. As I said, I love the details in the fight scenes and everything even down to scars has a significance. I'm looking forward to more from this author! :D"
Compelling read
"Great writing and world building, with characters that grab one's attention. The story is just beginning to unfold but I am already finding myself eager to hear where their adventure is taking them, and already watching the characters grow. Also - love the cover. Keen for more chapters :D "
Well written
"Nicely done! Writing style is superb. Gotta love a bit of mystery and suspense. Plot, storyline, and grammar are all very well written. Looking forward to more chapters :)"
