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Forbidden flame

"Well written. "

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So far I'm enjoying but anxiously awaiting to see how the alpha would react after confirming his suspicion

"Sometimes the real story gets lost, I'll recommend to my sister"

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I really like the storyline, a few mispelling here and there . The characters could have been personalized a little more but other than that , great story.

"I really like the storyline, a few mispelling here and there . The characters could have been personalized a little more but other than that , great story. "

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Revenge

"Really like this story so far."

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Hated by the Alpha

"Enjoying the story 😊 I done like how the story stops and it takes for ever for the next chapter "

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Hated by the Alpha

"I am very interested in your book. Is there a part 2?"

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Hated by the alpha

"Good so far"

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Love it, can I get acm to reading it now only question I have

"Love it dying to read more"

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Hated by the alpha

"Like the plot Disliked nothing"

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Good job

"I like the story line. It is very interesting. I dislike some of the spelling issues that makes it hard to understand what was said but besides that it's great"

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Hated By The Alpha

"This story is not getting the rating it deserves. Maybe because she's a new writer, bit I'm telling y'all: this book is dope❤"

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10/10 on the plot!

"I love the plot, but I would love a little more explanation of her mom. I feel like the chapters jump around characters POV a lot and would benefit from headers to indicate POV changes. "

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Hated by the alpha

"I enjoyed the entire story. The spelling errors threw me off with the few that there were but your writing is great and I truly enjoy and appreciate your story. Please continue with more"

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Hated by the alpha

"Great story.even with the spelling mistakes here and there. Please keep writing"

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Hated by the alpha

"I like the way Audrey Cheng her self I will recommend this noval to my sister's I like the way Andrew acted "

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YESSS

"I AM IN LOVE WITH THE PLOT AND I NEED MORE. I read this way too fast 😱😍😍"

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Good writing

"Love this story so far can’t wait to see what happens next. "

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Hated By The Alpha

"I love this book already! I can sense something interesting between Alpha Lake and his little witch. It's a well thought story, each words makes it more interesting. Can't wait for the next update 🔥"

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Hated by the Alpha

"There were a lot of mistakes in spelling. The author had good character development. When do we get the conclusion?"

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Interesting

"Can't wait to read more"

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