Chapter 1
Long ago a man called Pizza-Man was working at the pizza shop called Scominos. It was getting late so Pizza-Man went home. After the 6 hour long nap Pizza-Man went for a 6:AM walk with his brother Burger-Man. They walked though a forest called THE FOREST OF DOOM. Pizza-Man looked at his brother Burger-Man but he was nowhere to be seen. “Help!!!!” Screamed Burger-Man. Since Pizza-Man is as smart as Einstein (Well nearly) he could easily smell his brother from a few miles away from him. Even know Burger-Man had a natural smell, Pizza-Man can still smell him.
After 3 hours of walking and running Pizza-Man stopped by a weird circus tent. “Hmm he might be here’’ He whispered to himself. He looked in the seats then he looked in the toilets and blah blah blah. He then looked on the stage and saw bloodstains going into behind the stage. This was a great clue because Burger-Man’s finger has been bleeding. He pulled the curtains to see what’s behind there and saw a gang of killer clowns and saw his brother trapped in a cage. One of the killer clowns walked up to him and stabbed a knife into Pizza-man’s neck. He fell to the ground and his eyes closed.
NOOOOO!!!!!!! Screamed Burger-Man. But the thing is the killer clown is Pizza-Man’s best friend. Wah blood Wah. Said Pizza-Man. Pizza-Man’s death was fake. His best friend gave Pizza-Man his phone to call the police. Before the police came he had to fight…With guns! He shot the clowns and they fell to the ground they were alive though the police came and strapped them up. Pizza-Man saved his brother.
The end
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