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Love it

"I love this story and I'd tell my family and friends what I don't like is mindy she need to leave them alone"

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Rejected claimed by the alpha mafia

"Loved this book... the twists and tuns. I didn't want to put it down"

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Cool

"Wonderful, ingaging, amazing story to read"

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Good book

"Wow, some awesome writing. Good read"

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Interesting storyline

"I live it so far.. interesting and different "

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Rejected claimed by the Alpha mafia

"Love this book can't wait for more updates."

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No title

"So far I am enjoying this."

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Great book

"The plot is top notch. Perfect touch of everything; romance, suspense... It's a lovely read"

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Avid reader

"Such an awesome book. I hope you write more. Such an amazing writer. I didn’t notice any grammar or mistakes seen. "

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Rejected by the Alpha claimed by Alpha

"When will there be more chapters, and will Karia see a happy ending from all the rejection "

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Rejected claimed by the alpha

"Really enjoying it so far. The animosity between the two is intriguing. You can almost taste the sexual tension. Need more. "

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Good

"It good novel I will recommend it to my friends and family "

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God knows

"It’s ok story is a little much if I’m honest "

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Rejected Claimed by the Alpha Mafia

"I don’t like all the torture and killings. This reminds me of a domestic violence situation. Too much pain where is the love that ages are supposed to share"

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Worse Book

"The worse Book I've ever read "

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Bookstore

"I’ve read two books with no endings. This is crap. No more 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬"

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