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Josh and Fleur forever 💛

"The story starts off leaving you with a warm feeling, reading about high school sweet hearts. Obviously we need some obstacles because no romance doesn't come with a set of problems. The author does a great job in pulling you in Fleur and Josh's love story. I really love the main characters and how they developed into adulthood. A lot has changed for our favorite couple but as a reader we're still hoping they will rekindle their love 😭 At least I know I am. Great story! I am definitely rooting for Josh and will be waiting for the next chapter!"

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Great Romance

"Normally, Romance isn't my genre. I enjoy action, fighting, the work. But this story broke me out of that shell a little bit. Great interactions. I love the way the story has been building up and I enjoy seeing characters thoughts and actions. I can't wait to see more chapters!"

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Interesting Story

"My review is based on the first ten chapters of the story. Overall, it is very interesting and has a plot that keeps the reader very in tune, wondering what will happen next in the case of Josh and Fleur. Regardless of the time frame they have been together and apart, they hold good chemistry together as characters and feel like a real-life couple. While times have changed, and so have they, it leaves the reader curious as to whether Fleur will be willing to go back to her love, even though he truly doesn't deserve it. A lovely read and very well written! My only suggestion is to make sure all of the dialogue has quotations around it. Some chapters used the comma ' rather than the quotes ". I recommend this book to anyone looking for a short, quality read :D"

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it's a long road home

"You do not encounter many books that simultaneously make you feel happy and sad. Five Chapters in and I am enjoying how the story is unraveling. The author builds up the suspense and emotion of the characters very well. I am very excited to read where this story goes, I bet I am in for a beautiful rollercoaster of emotions through great writing. *I just wish the Chapters were a tad bit longer, gives more room for expression, more conversation, etc* A very good story! "

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Good story so far

"Very well written! I like the characters and I think the storyline definitely draws you in. Looking forward to more chapters :)"

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