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Smoothness

"The Smoothness of the writing needs a little help. BUT i am a fan of thos writers erotica. I do hope she writes more. The story is really good so far."

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Sooo hot

"I like that there’s not thing ridiculous long build up to how the characters feel about each other 5 stars because well it’s hot And I’d recommend it to my friends "

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My Girl

"There is a reason a lot of people have read this book. It is so good. I will definitely be reading this again in the future.💖💖💖"

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Simplistic but still entertaining

"I am going to say I enjoy the stories but gonna remove the app as we don't get the entire story...Or am I missing it?"

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My Girl

"Such a good story. True love at its best. Sometimes it's better to just let your best friend know that you're into his sister/brother and know that the friendship is strong enough to last even if the relationship doesn't. "

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Good read

"This book is a great read, just what you need and most likely something that resonates with so many. Can’t wait to read more."

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Juicy

"So far this story is EVERYTHING! "

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OMG

"I absolutely adore everything about it, from the vivid description to the heart stopping moments when Jake is so close to finding out the big secrete, overall 10/10"

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Good book

"Has multiple grammatical and spelling errors. Other than that it is a great book!😀"

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My Girl

"Loved this one! Left me wanting more! You have an amazing gift with your writing 😍"

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Caleb and kat

"I liked it "

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Yea

"A very good short story. Love the plot and the smut "

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My Girl

"Love the story line loved that they got together and her brother wasn't mad Awesome story keep writing novels similar to this Awesome just awesome "

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Very cute

"I like the story line. The spicy bits are great too. I know it hasn't been edited so I won't comment on spelling and grammar "

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Great novel

"Great novel but it does need better grammar and wording in certain situations"

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Short story

"Good writing. Nog to long or complicated. Keep on writing stories like these And we will keep reading them. Loved it. "

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My girl

"I loved the sex the sex was the best part sex sex sex sex the last chapter was cute and all but the sex "

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Brothers best friend

"Book is awesome"

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My girl

"I love this whole thing so far very spicy and I love it"

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Damn

"Hot as hell can't stop reading. I would recommend this to all of my friends. When I like a book as much as this one it's always 5 stars."

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