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I loved this so much

"I would recommend it to my friends "

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A wonderful short story of Survival

"I found this short story to be very readable. The heroine tugged at my heartstrings. I did feel however that everything pulled together at the end a little quickly. She suddenly is able to feel overcome her lethargy and before we know it she’s a successful artist and a mother. Where was the wedding? The pregnancy? This book can become so much more. Loved it so far….."

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Virgie's Take

"It was a strange start to their relationship. Antonio proved to be a mercy in her life. He is a dream boat."

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Loved it

"Compelling read"

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My Italian love

"Really enjoyed mafia is not normally my thing but couldn’t stop reading this you are very good fabulous "

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My Italian love

"This has got to be one of the best I have read I absolutely loved ,thank you for letting me read your story it made me feel so good ,you are definitely a great auther ,you will go far thank you "

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My little wolf

"Great story, I don't usually enjoy mafia stories but I enjoyed reading this story "

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amazing book !

"amazing!! i am so intrigued!! i feel awful for June, she has been through so much "

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Some misspelled words

"I love the story line but it’s missing some words and others are misspelt or the wrong form"

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My little wolf

"Wow!! Loved it!! Awesome read!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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My little Wolf

"Perfect read. Loved the entire book. Excellent work."

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My little wolf.

"I really enjoyed this story. I felt so sad about all June went through. I wish there was more of a story line more of her recovery."

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Interesting

"Oh my gosh, I thought she really was going to commit suicide, so glad she didn't, 🫡"

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Maya

"I love the book there are some words that are missed up I hope you make more chapters "

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You made me cry....

"I liked the story. I think that sometimes it goes a little to fast and you gloss over, but in the end you still made me cry... Good job😁. The ending was relatively abrupt and that could use some work too, but I think you got real potentials... Great job and I can't wait to read more from your hand."

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Jayda

"Really nice story, loved it!"

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My little wolf

"Lovely story ❤️ "

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Book review by Ayowole

"It was overall a good book. Nice story line. Had loads of grammatic errors though"

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