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What is your opinion?
Intriguing but slightly unpolished
"The plot is really good but the writing style leaves a lot to be desired. It’s a lot of “I did this”, “I did that”, “I wore this”, so it sort of lacks visuals. It has enough detail to be able to imagine it but it needs more to feel fully immersive"
My Next Door Neighbor
"This story is really straight forward, the ending doesn't surprise me. Also the story is concise, and can be read quickly. "
Needs some work!
"I dislike how you kept saying gonna, it sounds more professional when you say going to or not going to. This novel was also not very scary. I just didn't get the feeling I usually get. I would give it five stars but I gave it three because, as I said earlier it wasn't scary nor, suspenseful."
