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Obsessed

"This is unhealthy, lol. I started this one yesterday, and just couldn't put it down. I lost sleep about Christian and read untill 3 AM. 3 Am! Last time that happened I was still a teenager. Beauty treatment and dre-read needed, for sure, but your way with words... I felt like Chris the first half of the book in the sense that I was, again, waiting for the other shoe to drop. Honestiy, Chris' anxiety attacks after that made me weep, I read the last chapters shaking like a leaf, and cried again. In short, this 50 something woman went on adventure, laughed, cried and feared for two young enough for me to be their mother. That's the beauty of books, isn't it? "

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Next stop New Orleans 💜

"Another excellent book, I just love Christian and feel he is just a kindred spirit. His love for Darren is so inspiring, their wedding will no doubt be epic on a whole new story book level🏰🫅 Your writing is excellent, so emotive and pulls you in, I’ve cried, laughed out loud, and had my heart racing all the way through this journey. Thank you and keep on being perfectly imperfect cos after all, it’s all just a symptom of being human 💜"

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Every boys dream:M. Lane

"Congratulations Ms Lane, what a brilliant story with so much depth. I couldn't put down the story, I had cried, laughed and gasped. I loved the details in every scene to allow us to actually live the story. I am a fan ❤️"

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Every boys dream part two

"Absolutely loved this. Much, much better than part one, I'm so glad I preserved. I'm also glad it ended the way it did. Looking forward to reading the rest in the series when they are ready, would also love, love, LOVE an updated book after the two years anniversary. Darren and Christian 🥰"

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Every Boys Dream

"The story was very interesting and once I started I couldn't stop reading. I will recommend this story to friends and family. "

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Awesome

"I swear I've almost peed myself laughing several times!!!!! You're brilliant!"

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Every boys dream

"This has been a real rollercoaster of emotions ms Lane well done an PS Caleb is still my favourite he just tore my heart to shreds and lawwwd that Walkers is to die for and just loved Papa n mama Walker🥰maybe we could get a bit more of Eli too😍"

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LOVE LOVE LOVE

"I absolutely LOVE this book!! Love Christian. Love Darren and all the Walkers. Love Eli. I cried. I laughed. It was juicy. I really hope there is a book 3!!! Thank you for writing such an amazing story. "

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Wild!

"I loved this! Even more than the first one. The character development is brilliant and the plot keeps you whizzing along."

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Every Boys Dream

"I love the book. Istill want Caleb to find happiness it shitty the way know brother treated him. Cabel may be bad but, He an honest bad Guy . Darren,s pussy and an Asshole in my book. He pretends to be a good guy.Pretend to be the good baby boy. We spends all his time partying and going to a Hardcore BDSM Sex club . Darren wants the money but none the work and killing that comes with it. Basically . He the Dirty work to his brothers. Darren was given his brothers trust. And He ran off with Cabel lover and With the intention of hurting his brother. The second got into the jeep . Darren Lied . He never called or answered the phone. Or Talked about what they were doing. Darren Fucked him and gave to his friends for Alcohol , Sex and Drugs. So who Darren to judge Cabel. When Darren did the same thing. Taken Christian to sex club on a leash. Their big difference going Denver to shooting pictures and meet Designers . Then Activity going BDSM Club for Sex.with your brother Boy friends brother He fucked Eli.in the Club. He gave other men at the Sex Club his home phone number.. Cabel had right to be mad. A little of Alcohol and Money and Christian turned into a man whore. Darren better watch out. And Shit hit the roof. Darren call his Daddy and Mommy called his Daddy to fix everything. "

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Every boys dream

"Awesomeness 👍"

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EVERY BOYS DREAM..PART TWO

"Just finished book two. After book one I was going to write a review but lost myself in two instead. You are one hell of a writer, absolutely top notch. I know your not a spring chicken, because no one can write such in depth characters without having lived a full life. Your character development for almost every person in your stories leaves no doubt as to who they are, and how they emphasize with each other. I really want to continue with this story. I would like a list of your other stories to peruse through. Well done. Yours, not so very young, Bill Lesburg"

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Best Mafia Story

"The first book in the series was written to describe the Relationship between the Walker Brothers and Christian. The second book carried the story further and introduces more of the Walker family and Christians relationship with Darren. Quite a bit of BdSM but mostly the explanations of the role s of the Dom and the the Sub. Excellent storytelling and detailed characters. "

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Every Boys Dream-M+M Bollionaire/Mafia-Part Two

"Wow what a story. Definitely not my thing but found it enlightening "

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Every Boy's Dream

"M.Lane you are Amazing! I have read many of books on Inkitt, but none can compare to your writings! I cannot express the utter joy and enticements your books provided me through this character, Chris. These levels of love transpired all lines! Just..........Bravo! Well done! I cannot wait to go with you on this family's next journey!"

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Christians awakening

"I cringed and cried through this book for the abused shy & insecure man who is Christian.. he suffered under some very harsh toads and horrific dramas before finding his Prince Charming and a hopeful future.. thank you author for such an enthralling read.. looking forward to the next Christian chapters "

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Every boys dream :

"This story is amazing! Best I’ve read in a long time 🥵🔥❤️😊"

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