What is your opinion?
To @JazzyWrites
"Dear @JazzyWrites Crying Black Tears overall is well written with a great characters development and a good plot structure. I've noticed there are some technical writing errors through out the story of which can be a displeasure to readers. Personally, I've got confused sometimes, but thankfully to the plot structure and the characters development, I've got right back on track at reading and understanding the story. Its mysteries intrigue me, and that is why I'll keep on reading Crying Black Tears! Thank you for your hard work, @ahnjenjae "
Crying Black Tears
" "Crying Black Tears" tells the story of Isaiah, a former soldier grappling with PTSD and the weight of his mysterious past. His return home after years away raises questions about what truly happened during his absence. The narrative blends Isaiah's struggle with trauma and his entanglement in espionage. Poetic descriptions vividly capture Isaiah's emotional turmoil, while his internal battle and the suspense surrounding his journey keep readers engaged. The story excels in its emotional depth and poetic language, effectively portraying Isaiah’s internal struggles and the tension of his circumstances."
Enjoyed the read.
"The book's flow is nicely done and very poetic. You can feel Isiah's struggles with PTSD and adjusting to life once more after being a solider. Love the use of vocabulary and the vivid description to easily picture what's happening. "
Poetic and gripping!
"A young soldier is battling his own mental torment, but secretly caught up espionage. The only thing keeping him grounded is the sheer will to protect his family."
👍Great
"I adore this book because it's so deep. I think it took a lot of thought to write this meaning there is an intelligent mind behind it. Very good job."
Crying Black Tears
"Bleeding Black Tears This author has a gift for painting pictures with words. This author also excels at setting time and place firmly in your mind. Texture and detail spring from every paragraph. She paints with words the way an artist uses color. As a former soldier, I recognized traits of myself in Isaiah. I am intrigued and keep advancing through the chapters curious what was about to happen next. I have become drawn to him and the wounded warrior he has become. He is now fighting a different battle, with his inner self. And a very real mystery! The first fight scene reminded me of Ian Fleeming’s Bond character. Very good work and I highly recommend this title! "
Beautiful
"This was so beautifully written! The writer did an amazing Job. The writer knows how to portray the emotions well. I was absolutely immersed into the story. I cannot wait to read more if it. Isaiah's pain was so deeply explained I felt like I was with him experiencing all of it. Alicia is such a sweetheart. Overall plot is well developed. Grammer on point and well use of words. Amazing! "
Beautiful
"This story is beautifully heartbreaking. The main character, Isaiah, is a solider returning home for the first time in eight years. He is struggling with the changes that come with returning home. The imagery is very well done and the author does a great job making the emotions feel tangible in the chapters. While this is the author's first story posted, it has a lot of potential to be a great one. Keep up the good work, author!"
A Teardrop, is the only thing I remember feeling.
"Crying Black Tears" is a gripping and atmospheric story that skillfully balances introspection with action. The plot is engaging, drawing readers into Isaiah's world as he navigates the tension between his troubled past and uncertain future. The character development, especially the contrast between Isaiah's hardened exterior and his internal struggles, is compelling and adds depth to the narrative. The story structure is well-paced, with each chapter peeling back layers of Isaiah’s life and building suspense effectively. To enhance the story further, consider exploring Alicia's character more, giving her a bit more agency in the narrative, which could add additional layers to their relationship. Also, tightening the transitions between memories and present-day events could help maintain clarity and momentum. Overall, the story is thoughtfully constructed, and with a few refinements, it has the potential to resonate even more deeply with readers. Keep pushing forward, as your writing is both evocative and powerful, and it deserves to be shared widely!"
Crying Black Tears
"Poetic, Detailed, Suspenseful... Exactly the kind of book I like to read. I found myself gripped by the story and wanting to know more. Well done author, I can't wait to see what comes next."
POETIC PIECE!
" "Carrying Black Tears" is a captivating and beautifully written piece of work. The author's poetic descriptions and mesmerizing storytelling make it a truly remarkable read. A great talent is evident in every part of the book, evoking feelings of nostalgia and suspense. If you're looking for a compelling and moving literary experience, "Carrying Black Tears" should be at the top of your reading list."
Really compelling
"The writing style here is excellent, it's a really thought provoking piece with a darker twist and I'm really looking forward to reading more. Definitely recommend."
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"its a really great book so far. the way its written seems interesting so keep going. you are a great author."
Love It!
"I love the style of writing. It's very descriptive and paints a beautiful picture of emotion. The way in which the book is written gives off a lot of suspense. But I like how with each chapter a nugget of information is revealed and then another element of 'ooh, I must read on to find out what that meant' is also laid down. It's a lovely read and I can't wait to read on!"
Very Artsy and Descriptive
"This book is really well written so far. The pace of the story is rather slow, but I can tell that was intentional to build up suspense. The writing style was really interesting, I liked how poetic and artsy it was. I'm not going to give this book a score out of ten because it's unfinished. But I enjoyed what I read, and I'd like to see how the rest of the story unfolds."
Great Dialogue 👍
"The author's style is great! Loving the book already. I highly recommend this book to everyone 😍 Can't wait for what will unfold"
keep going
"its good just keep going it can only get better from here"
Poetic approach
"I am amazed at how well the author has played with the words. I am serious. His new approach to convey the scenes in a poetry is awesome but I am still confused about the plot. Consider adding paragraphs to make the readers read it organized. Nevertheless, this is awesome and the words are super. Compliments to the author as he shows great potential."
Really Interesting
"The poetic writing style is very refreshing and well done. I look forward to reading more."
Heartwarming Style of Writing
"The author has employed a poetic form of writing in explaining the plot of the story. The vivid descriptions and the use of words perfectly matches the situation that is being described. So far the story is still young so I cannot comment much about the plot but I belive that the story the author is cooking something good. I suggest the author should just continue with the poetic version. It suits the story perfectly"
