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Life.

" It is interesting how life can be, such as feelings, choices and secrets. One love ❤️."

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Favorite novel

"I like the novel actually it has me wanting and waiting to see what happens next."

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My 3 step uncle’s want me

"Loving this so far. More soon please "

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My 3 step uncles want me. The Alcatraz brothers

"When will you update more chapters of this book? I love it!"

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Awesome

"Great story. Please update soon"

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Compelling read

"I can't put it down. I haven't slept yet because I can't stop reading. Great writing. Great author. "

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Love the story so far. Romance books are my favorite books.. hope she hooks up with all of them.wonder what’s in the will…..not sure how it’s going to end .

"Love the book so far…. Story Has really picked up and can’t wait to read what will happen next."

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Crazy family

"It’s crazy how she met these 3 men in a club and it turns out they are family I wonder what is going to happen "

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Alcatraz brothers

"Enjoying the read. Where is the next bit? Like the characters too. "

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My 3 step uncles

"The story is very intense with lots of twist and turns but capacitive but thrilling "

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love it

"this book is guna be hood i can tell by the first chapter! i hope we get more soon!!"

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Intriguing

"I can’t wait to read more! "

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Hanging in

"Who Alex ended up with is intriguing me do I’ll keep reading. I’m finding the writing style quite disjointed with overlapping paragraphs and repeated sentences. Feels like a very early draft. Alex’s character is interesting. I’m hoping it develops further as the story progresses. "

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Happy birthday ❤️

"I love the plot twist"

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Fine

"I am only writing this to get to read the rest of the story. It is so far a fine story, but I would like to read it all before making a review."

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