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😍😍 brilliant 😍😍

"This is a wonderful story keeping you on edge from the very first word to the very last. The plot is so complex and so well thought through! Watching Valerie's path from being a simple naive girl to the amazing strong woman, from a pawn to the maker of her story... The world is brilliantly real, its logic working without a hitch. And one must not forget the amazing flawless language. This is one of the best books I read on this app."

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Treacherous Witch

"This story was a fabulous read. The story was very well written, thought-out and adventurous. Hard not to read from start to finish. Only thing that annoyed me to no end was the lack of steam....im hoping that comes in a second book.. This story deserves to be published and i would buy it for sure. Thank you for sharing your imagination with all of us. It absolutely fantastic!"

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One word, Three claps - Phenomenal.

"One word, Three claps - Phenomenal."

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Treacherous Witch

"Remarkable storyline "

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I hope the book 2 will come out soon

"I can’t wait for the sequel "

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Interesting book

"I love this book and looking forward for the sequel but my only problem is the romance was not enough "

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The treacherous witch

"Please tell me there is another book to this. I truly enjoyed reading your book but you can't end it here. Pretty Please.keep up the great work"

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Treacherous Witch

"What a wonderful story. So much drama and intrigue. Her feelings were torn of betraying him to having feelings for him. Yet wanting to be loyal to her prince. Torn between two "

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Amazing story

"Loved the world building, how the characters developed and the relationships! Amazing"

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Can’t wait for book 2!

"I loved the book and I loved seeing how Valerie went from her naive self to a self guided Queen. I only hope she doesn’t come back different? As in, cold hearted or bad. I hope she and Avon move forward in their journey and soon restore Mashkamere back to its glory. "

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Addicted

"The summary hooked me up, but the story, the writing, the characters and the history created behind this book are amazing ! I can’t wait to read the full story. It’s been a while that I was as excited about a story. Thank you "

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Has me mesmerized

"You know what is going to happen…sort of. Like getting caught while trying to escape. I did not expect him to stab her in the hand. She smart enough to be an interesting character without overdoing her planning and deceiving. I like her a lot."

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Story

"Recommended for fantasy lovers of intrigue "

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