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Honest opinion

"Honestly, when i first started reading it I didn't expect to like it so much but honestly the plot won me over. Something i belive i should mention is that sometimes the protagonist seems to know information that someone supposedly said but there is no mention of it (unless i missed it of course). Excluding that i really like thos book and can't wait for the whole trilogy to be completed. "

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La suite...

"La suite est pour quand ? C'est bien écrit ft c'est une belle histoire mais elle n'est pas finie !😥"

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The Door To Eternity

"I'm glad I read this book it was I can't wait to see Amriel get stronger she was a bit timid at first but that's to be expected I'm excited to see Amriel grow as a woman I can't wait to see her relationship with Tyreal grow too I can't wait to see where the next book takes their relationship "

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Good story

"I like the story the plot and twists. The writes skills are very imaginative and keeps you wanting to read more of the story. However there is a bit too much similar descriptive details about the look of surroundings and of character manurizums such as Zeph. I know you need fillers but maybe more movement in the storyline instead of repetitive descriptions. "

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Must read

"It is thrilling 😃"

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please try publishing

"just wow..."

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The door to eternity

"I have some decent books over the years but this one rates in the top .. the story is wonderful .. what is the second book called ?"

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Pleasantly surprised!

"I’m invested now and can’t wait for more. It did sometimes feel that the chapters would start disconnected from the last. I also felt like there was a lot of kind of meaningless filler chapters. Also wish we had dived more in to the fathers background and the new power that Amriel has gained. "

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Obsessed!

"One of a kind! When I started reading - I couldn't stop again. The author has a thing for writing, everything comes alive. Just read it!"

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Door to Eternity

"Wonderfully written saga. Loved the characters and the worlds. "

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Unbelievably good, but...

"After 483 pages, the story has not begun? What kind of story would it be? For God's sake! Excellent writing, excellent plot, excellent story..."

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who needs sleep…

"when you just have to keep reading the book because you can’t put it down! what interesting and great caracters and the built up of the book just keeps you in suspence. i did hope to get to the end and not a cliffhanger, but now i just have to find the next book. great writing!"

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Door to Eternity

"Really love this book. The author describes in detail a lot. Some things are confusing, and I have to reread but clarification comes quickly. Can't wait to see what happens."

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Great adventure

"I like the characters and their relationships, it's quite amusing "

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Thrilling read.

"Outstanding. "

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Me encanto

"Me ha encantado la trama del libro, me ha faltado un poco de diálogo pero aún así me engancho desde el principio, felicidades espero que salga pronto la segunda parte por qué no me puedo quedar con la intriga, un saludo"

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The door to eternity

"Enjoyed this book, but does go on a bit to much with the details. The descriptions are great to create a real sense of the scene but they are quite repetitive in parts detracting a little too much from the actual story. But love the story and characters just needs to move on a little quicker. "

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The door to eternity

"I love these period magical dramas. I recommend to family and friends. The author did an ok job with the plot. The Grammer was off sometimes but I could follow ok. Looking forward to the conclusion of this book"

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Wo ist Teil 2?

"Hi Ashley, Da fehlt aber noch gewaltig viel! Ich dachte die Geschichte sei abgeschlossen und dann endet sie so?! Das ist fies. Ich mag die Welt, die du langsam aufgebaut hast und die unterschiedlichen Charaktere. Schade, dass durch die lange Reise ihre Freunde nicht mehr vorkamen. Die neuen sind aber auch toll. Leider werden einige Kapitel am Anfang komplett auf Englisch wiederholt. Zum Glück bleibt das nicht lange so. Auch die Prophezeiung wird mindest einmal unterschiedlich ins Deutsche übersetzt. Vieles wurde bis jetzt angerissen, von daher bin ich gespannt wie es weiter geht. "

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