What is your opinion?
Intense, keeps you on the edge of your seat, wanting to know more and waiting to see if it will end the way you hoped it would.
"Intense, keeps you on the edge of your seat, wanting to know more and waiting to see if it will end the way you hoped it would. "
Wow
"Wow this book is very good at pulling the reader in and keeping them hooked until the end. I can't put it down or stop reading it ."
It's a gripping story, but the pronouns & lack of smooth transition make the story hard to follow- The development of moving the story forward quickly leaves gaps in the story line answering the whys How's and what's that would make the story clearer. Maybe delineating POV would help the reader keep track of the Characters, the storyline, timeliness allowing us to care about the characters and situations before getting lost and bored then giving up on the story
"It's a gripping story, but the pronouns & lack of smooth transition make the story hard to follow- The development of moving the story forward quickly leaves gaps in the story line answering the whys How's and what's that would make the story clearer. Maybe delineating POV would help the reader keep track of the Characters, the storyline, timeliness allowing us to care about the characters and situations before getting lost and bored then giving up on the story "
A mmm novel
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Caught by the alpha
"Very intriguing, but on the slow side. "
