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Great
"Everything seems good so far can't wait to read more"
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14 chapters read
Undecided
"I guess I will wait a bit to comment because t don’t really know how i feel about it yet 🤷♀️"
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14 chapters read
Lust or love
"I love this book so far! It’s amazing the plot twist are chefs kiss. The imagination that was put in this book was great also.i love the way is written. Amazing book."
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14 chapters read
Allegra finds her prince charming
"The author knows how to engage a readers emotions, I thought her Dad's friend was going to to spill but no. All in all the author is the master of his craft"
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Too spicy
"Conflicting emotions love or lust and to ewhom. "
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12 chapters read
Just what j was looking for
"The descriptions and the detail in the book allows the reader to really visualize the book. You will get into it and forget about everything else. I finished this book in one sitting and I cant wait to read more"
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8 chapters read
Hair you
"Love it love it love it love lit Cw "
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Interesting
"Interesting to see how others see the world"
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Room for improvements
" The story although not unique; is flowing at a quicker rate than other stories I’ve read. There have been some mistakes in grammar and wording, but it was easy to fill in the blanks or errors that were made. I wish that you were more descriptive about the actual sexual acts that you were telling, such as how his tongue moved or how it felt when he was inside her. Being more descriptive about what is happening makes for a more enjoyable reading experience to really get the reader hooked into the story."
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