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Jake's undoing

"Loved this novel started out with just enough tension and underlying se*$#l attractions umm such good writing are we going to see another book about the bestie Sasha "

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Great story

"Really good story from start to finish "

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Jake's Undoing book 2

"Wow! Sooo hot and oozing with carnal desires, love and affection. A perfect love story for me. I specifically love the vow🥰it tugged my heartstrings. It's beautiful! Thanks so much, author. Keep writing beautiful stories❤️❤️❤️"

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Great Read!

"Didn’t want it to end! Great book, fun to read! "

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Jake’s Undoing

"Great story. Love can be everlasting. Willing to be and do whatever your love wants. To have fallen and known from the time they met "

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A Page Turner!!

"I'm really enjoying this book so far. I can't seem to put it down! Really wanting to know what happens next! Great erotica if that's what you're looking for😊, you won't be disappointed 😉 😀 Enjoy!!"

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"The author deserves an award for real cos I was hooked from start to finish.I loved everything about this story "

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Good erotic read

"It is truly a good erotic read. I enjoyed the book. The characters and details made me want to read more. It wasn't like some books that give you maybe 2 steamy moments and lack those dirty little details that you are really reading the book for. "

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Please let me have a threesone with Jake and Conrad

"I love the smut in this book. "

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A truly great story

"Really like the plot and how spicy the story is! Well done ♥️♥️"

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Jake's undoing

"I am enjoying the story. It is not a dragged out thing and it keeps you interested. "

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LOVE!

"Absolutely loving this book and eagerly await update notifications! Thank you for being so consistent with your updates and always publishing a couple of new chapters at a time! ❤️"

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Jake

"Love these types of storyline"

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♥️♥️

"I feel like Conrad should be involved in one of their actual smut scenes "

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Great Book!

"Wonderful book, I love how the excitement builds slowly it keeps you wanting to read and find out what happens next."

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Spicy

"Good story amazing love it "

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Good so far

"The story has a definite erotic and exotic plot not good to read at work lol but I am enjoying the book"

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Jakes Undoing book 2

"Enjoyed it from beginning to end"

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Can’t wait for the next chapters!

"Really hooked to this story and eagerly waiting for more!!❤️❤️ "

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Review

"I loved the book!!! I hope there is more to come. Loved the detail in the writing, you have a way of pulling the reader in and feeling the characters emotions. If I had to choose one thing I didn’t like, it would be changing the events of Cassandra losing her virginity first then having her be intimate with both Jake and Conrad."

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