Inkitt
Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Christmas with my Alpha

"Great story .... had a few moments i didn't like but over all I enjoyed it "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Sweet romance

"The characters are very heart warming. Enjoyed reading it. A bit of typos etc, but nevertheless a lovely read. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Christmas with the Alpha

"Was a great book. Would Love to see more and Learn more about this pack. Sherry M "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Accept vs except

"Accept and except are two completely different words. It may seem like a small thing, but when they need to “accept” each other as mates it’s a big error. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Christmas with the alpha

"A wonderful story. Thank you for a great read. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Christmas with the Alpha

"Short, sweet, funny and full of heart. Great job! ❤️❤️"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
CHRISTMAS WITH THE ALPHA

"This was a really good short story. Your characters are so realistic. You definitely feel their emotions. Great work. 👏"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
❤️ 💙 💜 💖 💗

"I loved this story ❤️ ♥️ 💕 💖 💗 💜 ❤️ ♥️ 💕 💖 💗 💜 ❤️ ❤️ 💙 💜 💖 💗 💘 ❤️ 💙 💜 💖 💗 💘 "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Christmas with the alpha

"Great little story. So glad things worked out for them. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Christmas with the Alpha

"I really enjoyed Christmas with the Alpha. 🎄❤️ Although it's a shorter story at the moment, the author has already shared that they're in the process of editing it and adding more chapters, which I think will give the story and characters even more depth. The dialogue flowed well, and there was plenty of humour throughout. 😄 The characters had distinct personalities that came across naturally, making them easy to imagine and connect with. There are a few grammar and punctuation errors in the current version, but as the author has explained that they're actively editing the book, I'm sure these will be polished along the way. ✍️ Once the additional chapters have been added and the editing is complete, I think this will be a really enjoyable read. I'm looking forward to coming back and reading the finished version. Best of luck with the edits! 📚✨"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Christmas with the Alpha

"This was a good book that I enjoyed. Cant wait for more chapters. The grammar could be better and the spelling and the over all sentence structure. But all in all, it was enjoyable."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation