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The lesser of Two Malfoys

"I love this story I would like to see Lucius's feelings as he falls in love with her xxx"

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The lesser two Malfoys

"Hey, it's one of the best stories I've ever read and I love it so much, you are an amazing writerT"

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i NEED more😍

"I never thought I would enjoy this but it was absolutely amazing!!"

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Love It!♡

"I love the story, it's very detailed and beautifully written. Also, you don't change their character, i'm so glad with that. This is one of my favorite HarPot fanfic. Hope you can make other good story like this, maybe SeverusxHermione love story. 😊"

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Stunning

"I absolutely adore this story!! The characterization is excellent, and all of Hermoine and Lucius' interactions have been perfect. I love the slow burn! It really gives the reader a chance to see inside each character's mind, and guess how they'll react to certain developments along the way. It's very real."

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Loved this chapter!

"So sad to see their trip cut short, but hooray for Ginny! Thank you for the update, this was a great chapter."

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