What is your opinion?
Bloodbound
"Great story❤️"
Love your story
"Thank you for sharing your creativity with us readers. I love your story. Your characters are amazing. At times though it feels like you are trying to reduce the number of words you were using so the story kind of jumps or feels rushed. I do appreciate this story. I love the humor in it. I love your perspective. I look forward to reading more of your work."
Bloodbound: The Vampire King’s Beloved
"Such a great written story and a even greater plot! It has you hooked from the first chapter and it’s a page turner! "
The Vampire king's beloved
"I'm really enjoying this story. The male and female lead characters are very distinctive personalities. I think as they evolve, so will the story. The sexual tension is through the roof. "
About the story
"Story was good but ending was a little disappointing it could have been much better "
Good idea but rushed plot
"The book has a pretty good plot and characters but it develops too quickly and doesn’t finish out some of the scenes. It jumps from a plot twist to the ending very fast without the normal build up you would see between. There is a lot of time given to the beginning of the story but there is very little to the first twist in the middle with Evanders change, the mention of a dark witch, no intro of the dark witch and a sudden end with the bad guy suddenly there and gone. The main character buys rings but never gives them, there should be an introduction and description of characters, and rooms/places, to give the reader an image to see and that is lacking. There is a great plot with good twists but it needs more padding and information in between evanders new powers, the introduction of the new bad guy and the ending. Overall I liked the story. "
