its just what i felt after reading it

"i was happy with the profile pic of dazai but sorry to say this fanfic dont makes much of sense...like as a friendly advice you should focus on what happened in real canon lus add character details like appearence plus past history describe each scene carefully avoiding awkwardness and dont go overboard like dont change the nature of the characters in canon and this fanfic is short and dont mind it but thats just my opinion about it so i still read it be careful next time for fanfic bcz people enjoy them more instead of actual works....thats it...thanks if youre reading it and consider my advice..."