What is your opinion?
Wow
"This story really good,so far I have a hard time putting it down. I would say the writer has a way to keep the action going"
Truly riveting story!
"Although I was a bit skeptical at first, the further I got into Melanie’s journey, the more hooked I became. I cried and got angry and chewed my nails when things got tense. What I love the most is the fact that Melanie was able to somewhat over come the burdens on her heart and mind. I love that her and Aliyah can actually say they’re family. I absolutely cannot wait to read more of their story. "
Fourth birth the oak mount saga
"Great writing with twists and turns. Makes one think if something like this could really happen. And could a government agency really be as blind as to what was going on."
Great
"I like the story."
The orange stuff
"I absolutely love this book. The characters and plot are where they need to be. A comment was made in an earlier chapter; I agree that there should be a notice when there is a change in characters talking. An example is when John and Rudie would converse. Other than that this was the perfect story."
Extremely captivating.
"Excellent novel. Extremely captivating. Only critic is I would have made the girl a few years older. But still, excellent."
Fourth Birth The Oakmont saga
"Not to much in y/a books but this was a great and exciting book from start to finish. Really loved the entire story. Is there a 2nd book ? I truly hope so but if not that's fine. Please keep writing I'm its going to be great. Thank you for sharing. "
FORTH BIRTH
"LOVE THE STORY LINE. VERY RIVITING.STOY I DIDN'T WANT TO STOP READING EVEN TO GO TO BED. HAVE TO SAY THIS IS ONE STORY I WOULD LOVE TO SEE TURNED INTO A MOVIE."
A must read!
"Highly recommend this book to everyone! Looking forward to the next books! "
Amazing
"Love this book, it's very well written.I couldnt put it down."
Wow
"What an incredible story! It was hard to read the parts of the assaults (it will be good to put a warning for trigger) but the story is written so well that I was just rooting for the protagonist all the way! Thank you for this story and I can't wait to read the next one."
Fourth Birth - Oakmont Story
"This book had so many twists and turns and the depth of the description was just excellent. It felt like the author actually studied a lot to bring this book to life. one of my favourite stories so far on Inkitt."
I liked the book the fourth birth Oakmont Sega book 1
"I enjoyed fourth birth Oakmont Sega book1 really looking forward to the next one "
Unputdownable
"A riveting story that captivates from beginning to end. I'm keeping this review short so that I can start the next book. To be ridiculously pedantic, I only saw one error; and that stood out because of the absence of errors. "
Best book!
"Wonderful read! Perfectly written book no errors. The author has a great talent for description and story telling. All throughout reading it felt like I was there! I am excited to read the next book and look forward to any more after that! This book has so much emotion to it that I would say it's an emotional rollercoaster in a good way! "
An excellent read..
"One big problem.. well, two I guess. First - I couldn't put it down. Then, it ended. Glad I saw there are more to read. 😁"
Amazing read!!
"Completely enthralled in this story and all the details make me feel as though I am there. Really reccomend reading. Can't help but fall in love with Melanie and root for her to overcome her situation. "
Powerful
"The early part was very difgicult to read, not because it was badly written but due to the intense emotion. The author has real talent. I thought it was implausible that none of the staff who objected to the treatment of the inmates took any action or resigned. Other than that it was riveting stuff. An editor who can sort out homophones is required as a spelling checker cannot."




