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Spannend, nervenaufreibend und auch erheiternd. Bisher wirklich super.

"Die verschiedenen Perspektiven liebe ich. Man fiebert die ganze Zeit wann die Handlungsstränge sich begegnen. Man möchte schreien, dass die Leute doch bitte mal komplett miteinander reden damit sich so manche Knoten lösen, aber das macht die Spannung aus! Bisher top!"

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Annastatia Botha

"I like it all and I would recommend it to anyone who is interested in stories like this."

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Please continue!

"So far a great book, please continue to write or wrote updates on when we should expect more. "

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Great story

"This is a good one and really engages the reader. The characters are interesting and can be funny as well. I recommend reading it."

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Love this story

"I hope it can be completed soon; I'm invested in this story!"

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Very good story. But where is the rest of the story

"Awesome storytelling but would be nice to have the rest of the chapters. Finish the book and I will give you the review. "

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Love

"I have A.D.D. and A.d.h.d this book has kept me in check. I absolutely love it. It is beautifully written<3 "

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Great so far

"I hope there's an update soon. This story is really good"

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Love this story, it’s like an action, drama filled fairy tale...

"I loooove this story!! It’s like one plot twist after the other and the way this alpha loves his mate is so admirable. I haven’t been able to stop reading this. "

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A novel

"The story line is really good. It's not always smooth. But spelling. Need to proof read. I definitely want to finish this."

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Finally

"I actually reread the whole book again as it’s been so long for an update but oh my god I feel in love with the book all over again ❤️❤️. It’s really is just a lovely story even with all its horrific stuff in it. It has you crying one minute then so aweeee the next. I have to say this is just a lovely rollercoaster of a story but brilliant writing. Can’t wait for more update 👏🏻👏🏻🙏🙏🙏🙏"

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Alpha Sampson's half-breed mate

"Recommended it to my girlfriend to read. It is a very good book I like the plot I like the characters. All in all very good writing just needs to read through with a few little corrections on words like him and her little Mix-Ups like that nothing major."

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Just love

"Thank you so much for the update. Such a good book."

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Alpha Samson's mate

"It takes longer to be updated.. that's my only problem 😕. further than that I got no complain☺️🥰"

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Alpha Samson's half breed mate

"Story is great. Incorrect words and grammar distracting but don't really affect the flow of the story but it would be better without them . Keen to know what happens next"

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A good read

"I like the book and the characters "

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Sue

"Really enjoying the plot and hoping it all works out happilu"

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Awesome read

" I need more chapters it left me hanging, when will the next update be"

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Great story!

"I love the plot to this story. Very different from a lot of others. There are some misspellings and grammar issues, but not so terrible you can’t read it thoroughly. Would definitely recommend this book."

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Alpha Samson's half breed mate

"Ok... So when is the next book??? Loved it"

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