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Luna

"This book is wonderful so far."

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The Alpha's Broken Mate

"I would recommend it to anyone who likes werewolves, magic, and romance. I like tge fact that Alpha Samson is so patient with his mate. I really enjoyed Alora getting her magic and protecting her pack!!"

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Grteat story

"The plot is moving at a steady pace and the characters Are hreat "

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Alpha Samson's Half Breed Mate

"Enjoyed reading th story and I'm looking forward to reading more chapters."

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Needs proofreading.

"I love this story and can't wait for new chapters. Someone needs to proofread it though and edit it. There were misspelled words and wrong pronouns being used. "

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alpha samson's half breed mate

"Love the support and encouragement Alora receives from Sampson, the pack and her Grandfather and Uncle. "

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Moon born outcast an alphas broken mate

"Story line keeps you intrigued and makes you want to keep reading..I've read 500 pages today"

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Alpha Samson's half breed mate

"A must read. Interesting characters and plot. Captivating story line. Makes you want to keep reading. "

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Alpha Samson's Half Breed Mate

"Excellent story - captures your interest and makes you want to read on chapter to chapter. I hope all of it is available like on other platforms"

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Great

"I love the plot & characters. The humor with the love and action. "

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Alpha Sampson’s Half Breed Mate

"Love the story, it is suspenseful and I love that Samson is respectful of Alora and letting her lead and get comfortable. A lot of books/stories rush into the mating of gave the male rejected mate. I love that Alora is strong and doesn’t let her past define her. Samson sees Alora and loves her for who she is regardless of her lineage, her past, and regardless of her magic. He loves her for her. They aren’t just behaving like wild animals and going straight to the mating. There are some granmatical errors but I’m able to figure out the missing or incorrect word in context 99% of the time. But for the story I can definitely look past that. Grammar can always improve and I love the story that is developing. Looking forward to seeing it all come to a head with her former pack and becoming Luna."

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Loved,

"I cannot wait for the rest of the novel!!!"

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Good read

"Well written, good story line. Relatable characters."

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Spannend, nervenaufreibend und auch erheiternd. Bisher wirklich super.

"Die verschiedenen Perspektiven liebe ich. Man fiebert die ganze Zeit wann die Handlungsstränge sich begegnen. Man möchte schreien, dass die Leute doch bitte mal komplett miteinander reden damit sich so manche Knoten lösen, aber das macht die Spannung aus! Bisher top!"

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Annastatia Botha

"I like it all and I would recommend it to anyone who is interested in stories like this."

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Please continue!

"So far a great book, please continue to write or wrote updates on when we should expect more. "

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Great story

"This is a good one and really engages the reader. The characters are interesting and can be funny as well. I recommend reading it."

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Love this story

"I hope it can be completed soon; I'm invested in this story!"

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Very good story. But where is the rest of the story

"Awesome storytelling but would be nice to have the rest of the chapters. Finish the book and I will give you the review. "

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Love

"I have A.D.D. and A.d.h.d this book has kept me in check. I absolutely love it. It is beautifully written<3 "

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