Unintentional Desires

"I will start off by saying that I do like the story and want to continue reading the remainder of it. It kept me interested. I think it is a little fast on how things play out with more interpretations than explanations. The grammar is a little off. I mean, you can tell what the author is saying, but it’s not correct words or punctuation. For example, the author uses “Am” for “I’m”. Other than that, it’s a pretty good story. I wonder what Gustavo and the stepmom and daughter are up to. Can’t wait to find out. "