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I hope there's a part two to this

"I hope you finish some of your books because I'm still waiting there is one called the mafia's president there's one with a girl that's found in the woods there's another one that's a part two that talks about Debbie Midnight's daughter that we haven't finished yet so whenever you get the time I'm enjoying the stories and I reread as much as possible but I'm looking for new ones as I go along thanks for your stories they're really good I appreciate it"

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Dream girl

"Well that was awesome!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Mixed Emotions...

"The book has many twists and turns. Sone I loved others made me want to shout out loud "What the hell?" The author did a fabulous job writing characters that are despicable and yet others that are true keepers. Was not expecting the ending... kinda wanted a 'happy ever after' ending, but know the storyline does not allow it. Good book... loved the writing even though there is much frustrations with several of the male characters."

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Good story

"Lot of unhappiness.please complete the story."

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Dream Girl

"Wow what a fantasy story. So many twists and turns. So much drama and intrigue. So many strong women who had suffered abuse and yet the became strong and true to their mates"

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Dream girl

"This book has kept me wanting more. It full of excitement and even in tears. Keep up the great writing and the books "

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Adventure

"I really enjoyed reading the story. "

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Greaaaaaat!

"Love love love love love love!!!"

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Dream girl

"This book is amazing I enjoy to read this , I can’t wait too see what happen with the new rules that have been set for matting "

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Dream girl

"Wonderful full of life so real. Thank fir this great novel. Hope you have more like this "

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Dream girl

"I like the book so far. The characters and plot are awesome. The punctuation and all needs fixing. Great writing so keep on writing. "

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Pretty good book so far

"The book I'm ready so far is turning out to be a pretty good book can't wait to get further in and see what happens"

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Dream girls

"I likes everything about the book. They going get together and I would recommend this book to anyone I can’t put book down to good"

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I love this story so far cant wait for more

"I love this story so far cant wait for more"

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Great Read

"😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊"

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Good

"Really good start but need more quicker. Please"

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Rejected mate

"Okay this felt like two book that merged together. As names got changed and went from mafia romance to shifter romance to lots of family drama. Find some new names for characters. It's getting confusing "

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sad

"why did you take sara ,temper, hammer, amy jo,the mafia hamer's mom sara's step mom because when she went home to her real life the mob's princess remember her dad gave her so many years of freedom. she marries jack hammer they go on honey moon they come back go to the company find amy jo being bullied by that chic who was stealing from the company you never dealt with that amy jo was super poor with a daughter her mate temper had left her why did all of this go away this is crazy!!"

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Great

"To many stories in one, the characters seems to change names Temper/Jack, or is it other characters that have same names? "

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Brenda’s thoughts

"Confused.The characters have changed ."

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