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An excellent beginning
"This is an early review. Quite an original sci-fi. There's no slow introduction, the plot starts right off and it's intense. We follow the story through the eyes of the MC Lillith, an assassin of a sort on her assignment that goes unexpectedly wrong. And this is just one of the odd, intriguing things that began happening in this edgy, unsettling new world. There are people with special abilities and there's a very interesting biblical reference to it all. The characterization is pretty amazing - the MC and the two individuals - biblical brothers - highly intriguing, well written characters. The dialogues most stood out to me - super sharp, witty, humorous and deep, giving each character a distinctive voice. I enjoyed reading them. The descriptions of what's happening are very vivid and detailed - perhaps this is where the writer -- the volume of details when describing MC's every movement and perception -- could tame down a bit their otherwise well crafted paragraphs of setting. The writing is practically flawless - a pleasure to read. I think we can expect a very high quality story and I'm curious to see where it's gonna go. For now this gets all stars from me. "
A New Age
"'A New Age' is a riveting sci-fi tale that immediately immerses readers into a futuristic world. The protagonist, with their sharp wit, remarkable telekinetic abilities, and a penchant for bending rules, is both intriguing and relatable. The introduction of mysterious new characters in the second chapter adds layers of intrigue and complexity, promising an exciting journey ahead. "
