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Excellent hook
"I love how immersive this opening is, vivid descriptions, good energy, the twist caught me off guard, and now I want to read more! You can't write like this and then stop, seriously, I need the next chapter! "
Makes you want to read more.
"This review is for the first chapter. The writing was perfect with how everything was described and the character's feelings. I was right there feeling it with her. The first chapter hooks you and just wants you to read more."
