What is your opinion?
Perfect Disguise
"I love the story and emotion. It's a very interesting story. The plot is good and I'm curious to find out more. "
Lovely
"Very beautiful write up."
Perfect disguise
"Such a good story "
Good story
"The story is interesting and made me want to know what happens. Unfortunately, it mentions being set in LA but doesn’t feel like an American story. There are all the signs of being written by someone not familiar with American culture and common mistakes like someone whose first language isn’t English. Because of these things, it would have been better if it were set in another country that made more sense with the way it’s written and the way people interact. It’s not very like LA or Americans at all. Nevertheless, I think it’s a great story and if set in a different place, I would probably rate it higher. "
