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Continue the story

"Please continue this story! I'm hoping with it being a year now since any updates, that you'll still continue with the story. It's great so far and we gotta know what happens with prom! "

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Love it

"Great story, speed it up, I want to see what will happen!!"

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More PLEASE 🥺

"I can't wait to see how this ends!!! 🖤🖤🖤"

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Seriously yummy 😋 So underrated

"Malakai sounds absolutely yummy 😋 I want him for myself. I wouldn't really consider this erotic but I would really love for it to continue and become erotic. I really, really want this story to go further, and I know I'm not alone in wanting that. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE continue it!!!!! I seriously don't understand how underrated this story is, and I didn't think it was corny at all. You need to give yourself more credit 👍 All of those who have read this will go crazy for a sequel to continue and complete it. I personally may go insane if you don't, lmao!!!!! 💜💜💜💜"

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I like the way you describe every single scene so perfectly as if we are watching it instead of reading it.

"I love the big brother and the sis ♥️♥️♥️"

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Good reading can't put it down.

"Good reading and can't put it down every chapter is enthralling "

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Review

"💥🔥🌶️ great writing, I’m thinking I may have to wait for more chapters "

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Review

"💥🔥🌶️ great writing, I’m thinking I may have to wait for more chapters "

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Malk and never

"Hot, slow start but good"

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Pls continue plssss🙏🙏🙏

"I like how Raine express her emotions "

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My brother

"Some scene jump for one and anotherbut writing style are not bad. But more details can be add to it such as when Damien came and etc"

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Mim

"It’s really good so far from what I have read"

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Big Brother

"Nice so far."

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Brother

"I’m hooked, this is my favorite story on this app so far!"

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Loyal Reader

"Ahh this chapter was so good!!! Definitely worth the wait "

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teenage love

"Waiting for the rest. "

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Stepbrother

"Its a good book upto now. But i suggest you continue writing profession too."

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Idk

"It was rlly good "

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Big brother

"It’s was a little corny but still good love the story can’t wait for update"

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Romance novel

"Well written story. The characters are spot on. A great read. Thank you !!"

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