What is your opinion?
Good Read
"It’s a good short story that you could read after reading the first Winston Brother’s book. It shows the strong attraction between Jessica and Duane and also shows their funny/carefree sides. I also like that Duane is protective of Jessica but also wants her to go outside her comfort zone a bit. Overall loved it, a good tasteful spicy read. "
Sexy Short
"I totally agree that they would travel for some holidays. That seems accurate. However I think they'd do more local/cultural exploring instead of marathon sex. Jessica wants to see the world and that means being in it. Duane's there for Jessica, sure, but he's ready to be delighted by things too. Also I'm unsure if Duane would try to convince Jessica to do something she didn't want to do. Duane always seemed pretty binary to me, not a lot of grey space. I also expected to end on Duane's POV just because he was the 2nd chapter. Maybe tell the whole thing from Jessica's POV if Duane only gets a quarter of screen time? It was very short; even the sex scenes weren't fleshed out. I liked some of the ideas you have here and wished to hear a bit more about them (dog sledding?!). Cheers!"
